tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515903861204137058.post3520557292694631436..comments2023-10-30T09:00:07.439-05:00Comments on A Walk In My Shoes: These Shoes Draw Attention... (RE-POST)Susan R. Millshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09578747592345750650noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515903861204137058.post-6768652282731791072010-03-05T06:34:24.516-06:002010-03-05T06:34:24.516-06:00First and last lines are important. We sometimes t...First and last lines are important. We sometimes tend to forget, however.<br /><br />Wow!I have to say those are the oddest looking shoes I've ever seen.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515903861204137058.post-11467088786589559122010-03-05T04:53:43.666-06:002010-03-05T04:53:43.666-06:00I have tried, that is all I can say!
Mmm not sure ...I have tried, that is all I can say!<br />Mmm not sure about the shoes, poor fish!Glynis Peters https://www.blogger.com/profile/01175378917872403609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515903861204137058.post-76493065772105759902010-03-04T20:22:22.145-06:002010-03-04T20:22:22.145-06:00I pay a huge amount of attention to the beginning ...I pay a huge amount of attention to the beginning of the first scene, which begins my book. I have to pay attention to the beginnings of other scenes too, since my manuscript covers a lot of territory, and I have to alert the reader how far we've moved in time and space - and plot.David F. Weismanhttp://davidfweisman.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515903861204137058.post-36809898747246409182010-03-04T13:13:51.560-06:002010-03-04T13:13:51.560-06:00Not enough, I don't think. I try really hard t...Not enough, I don't think. I try really hard to leave my chapters in a tense spot, but every scene? Yeah, I'm with you. I need to work on that.<br /><br />And those fish shoes are awesome!!! But wouldn't it get, like tossed around a lot? And what if it broke? The poor thing. :(Elana Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05877856005992028912noreply@blogger.com