tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515903861204137058.post1953522689930969583..comments2023-10-30T09:00:07.439-05:00Comments on A Walk In My Shoes: Ooops!Susan R. Millshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09578747592345750650noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515903861204137058.post-85320688366567685462011-02-04T20:05:30.679-06:002011-02-04T20:05:30.679-06:00That is excellent advice, Susan. And uh...unfortun...That is excellent advice, Susan. And uh...unfortunately, no. I haven't noticed any glaring errors in my manuscript lately because that would require that I would have actually LOOKED at it lately! Oi! I'm so frustrated with how the busyness of my life is taking me away from my WIP! But tomorrow is a new day, right?Name: Holly Bownehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01079363337603264641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515903861204137058.post-37102878373670144032011-01-31T10:38:00.595-06:002011-01-31T10:38:00.595-06:00Um... I never thought of that and now I'm doin...Um... I never thought of that and now I'm doing it. Thanks. Really. I appreciate it. ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09556206184198452490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515903861204137058.post-64181023852241501672011-01-30T16:33:58.021-06:002011-01-30T16:33:58.021-06:00I have to laugh at your pic because a couple days ...I have to laugh at your pic because a couple days ago I rushed out the door to drop off my kids somewhere and I had two different tennis shoes on. They were both white so I didn't notice at first. When I got there, I noticed one was a sketcher and one was a Reebok.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515903861204137058.post-74367335371330822322011-01-30T13:36:06.098-06:002011-01-30T13:36:06.098-06:00I've had that happen too! It's usually fro...I've had that happen too! It's usually from moving it around, just as you said. I totally agree on the fresh eyes. So helpful!<br /><br />I hope you're enjoying your weekend, Susan!<br /><br />P.S. - I haven't worn shoes from two different pairs out in public, but I have almost gone out in my slippers. Yeesh.Dawn Simonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05667675689038435581noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515903861204137058.post-19921065608979595592011-01-30T12:47:21.935-06:002011-01-30T12:47:21.935-06:00laughing me arse off at the errors (an m) at the e...laughing me arse off at the errors (an m) at the end of ironically *LAUGHING* Um, I mean, I did that on purpose to make a point....teeheeheeKathryn Magendiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12863595228298349863noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515903861204137058.post-80346930899625132482011-01-30T12:45:53.078-06:002011-01-30T12:45:53.078-06:00I will tell you this - even when you have fresh ey...I will tell you this - even when you have fresh eyes read it, mistakes STILL happen or are unnoticed in the final one! <br /><br />Not a one of my published novels are mistake-free- even if it's just a small one or two - and they've been read and edited and read again and edited again and again- by me, by my editor, by a copyeditor, by a friend, by my husband - and still...<br /><br />There are so many opportunites for mistakes to happen: just as you say -things are switched around, or when you fix ONE error ANOTHER error is made, but you are in a hurry to get to print and as you fix that something, you think you are okay, and guess what? Ironicallym, you messed up something else in the fixing of the other!<br /><br /> Sometimes it's so obvious you can't believe it wasn't found - sometimes it's things no one will know but you, and others, it's the cringe of "Omg - one of the quote marks is missing!" or "omg one says my aunt Ruby and the next one is my Aunt Ruby" ! <br /><br />My ultimate goal is to have a book go to print without a single error - I can hear editors and publishers laughing from here *laugh*Kathryn Magendiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12863595228298349863noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515903861204137058.post-36593310907232024142011-01-30T11:43:41.331-06:002011-01-30T11:43:41.331-06:00Hi Susan, it's good to be reading your posts a...Hi Susan, it's good to be reading your posts again. They help me know I'm not alone in my mistakes. Thank you for staying in touch. It didn't go unnoticed. Love you!Ellie Kingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14711249217634726986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515903861204137058.post-13615887755878311212011-01-29T18:40:15.640-06:002011-01-29T18:40:15.640-06:00I can see how easily that line got overlooked by a...I can see how easily that line got overlooked by all of the people that worked on the book.<br /><br />I consider myself an expert speller and grammarian. (Now I have to make sure I don't have a typo in this post. Jeez.) But it takes a crit partner or spouse/friend/whatever to point out something your eyes have drifted over a million times. Your brain registers the word "cold," but what you have written is the word "cool."<br /><br />It's always...always important to get fresh eyes on your work.<br /><br />Thanks for the reminder.Ronald L. Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03649046677631873728noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515903861204137058.post-28666713210554934802011-01-29T13:11:02.645-06:002011-01-29T13:11:02.645-06:00Gah! I would hate for that to happen. And I can se...Gah! I would hate for that to happen. And I can see how it could EASILY happen. Yes, definitely a reason for fresh eyeballs on the piece after revision (esp major revision). Happy weekend!Carol Riggshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14092209912983783974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515903861204137058.post-19665335241100124392011-01-29T11:06:19.657-06:002011-01-29T11:06:19.657-06:00In my finished MS I have a character who floods hi...In my finished MS I have a character who floods his sibling's bedroom. Until the second to last draft (draft 20something), that sibling was a brother, but later in the story the same character says he doesn't have any brothers, only a sister. NO ONE CAUGHT IT. Not me, not my CPs, not my family...no one. I finally noticed on a round of line edits! :-)Shannon O'Donnellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17299313309059235876noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515903861204137058.post-3132408941885407342011-01-29T10:04:55.206-06:002011-01-29T10:04:55.206-06:00I think all the easy to characterize and fix probl...I think all the easy to characterize and fix problems with my manuscript have been caught, with the help of many other writers.Davidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00819223137850041043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515903861204137058.post-62860890349266085912011-01-28T22:21:21.427-06:002011-01-28T22:21:21.427-06:00I've had both happen to me.
With the shoes, I...I've had both happen to me.<br /><br />With the shoes, I grabbed a pair of black pumps to take on my trip for the in-laws big anniversary. Only they weren't the same pair. One was higher by 1/2 inch. At least they weren't for the same foot, but I did spend the night walking funny. ;)<br /><br />As for the ms, I swear my computer has a virus that purposely moves commas around and misspells words that were fine when I save the document. That's my story and I'm sticking to it. :DStinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11415189347501942340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515903861204137058.post-91773755026605992072011-01-28T19:10:51.382-06:002011-01-28T19:10:51.382-06:00yes. there is always something to wrk on hey. spel...yes. there is always something to wrk on hey. spelling is probably my biggest downfall. I just don;t see the mistakes until someone points them out.Tabitha Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08196816108272065974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515903861204137058.post-42228244234566978442011-01-28T18:25:51.312-06:002011-01-28T18:25:51.312-06:00When I read this at first, I thought you meant the...When I read this at first, I thought you meant the line was repeated in a row (I've seen that happen and that kind of pulls me out of the story for a second or two), but I doubt I wouldn't have noticed what you're pointing out. And even if I had, I wouldn't have minded too much.Plamena Schmidthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14222695582552877560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515903861204137058.post-53274424428072131702011-01-28T17:25:52.893-06:002011-01-28T17:25:52.893-06:00Boy, do I know what you mean. A writer develops wr...Boy, do I know what you mean. A writer develops writer's blindness and pretty soon you're reading words that aren't even there. Keeping my fingers crossed that you didn't read the error in one of my books.<br /><br />BTW: I hate to admit it, but one time I went out with one black shoe and one navy blue. Embarrassed? Yes! But in my defense they were the same style, and it was dark. :}Kathi Oram Petersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11959149321213743448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515903861204137058.post-26624462197155900572011-01-28T15:45:10.769-06:002011-01-28T15:45:10.769-06:00It wasn't a grammar book, was it? Some time ag...It wasn't a grammar book, was it? Some time ago, one of my writing professors recommended a grammar book that had glaring errors in it. (I don't think he realized this.) The irony made for good humor.<br />My work is always riddled with errors. And right now I'm the only one doing the editing. It's a little tricky, by I'm not yet near publishing.Jaynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06694559900539722616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515903861204137058.post-27977686191849029262011-01-28T14:33:44.129-06:002011-01-28T14:33:44.129-06:00This is so true! I've found places where I'...This is so true! I've found places where I've changed things, but only deleted most of it, or sometimes left a suffix on. >.< It's incredible how easy it is to miss things from being familiar with them. :)Danyelle L.https://www.blogger.com/profile/10366276085080565870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515903861204137058.post-20463281703676646642011-01-28T13:54:05.499-06:002011-01-28T13:54:05.499-06:00Yes, I'm guilty! Thank goodness my internal ed...Yes, I'm guilty! Thank goodness my internal editor doesn't let me get away with that.Tanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10518718614911804428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515903861204137058.post-66776308949789291402011-01-28T13:51:50.284-06:002011-01-28T13:51:50.284-06:00I once read a book that dealt with grammar and hon...I once read a book that dealt with grammar and honest to gosh, it misused "it's."Cathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16900383840255608898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515903861204137058.post-34784498885248092152011-01-28T12:54:45.595-06:002011-01-28T12:54:45.595-06:00I caught one of those in my wip just this week. Al...I caught one of those in my wip just this week. Also, I used the word linger like 5 times in 115 pages. *blushes* <br /><br />Great post, Susan. Enjoy the weekend!Tere Kirklandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13562750950130316280noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515903861204137058.post-21074329499456605902011-01-28T12:07:33.758-06:002011-01-28T12:07:33.758-06:00I haven't noticed any glaring mistakes lately,...I haven't noticed any glaring mistakes lately, but I sure have in the past. I've run the whole gamut! You are correct--a fresh pair of eyes really makes a difference.J.B. Chicoinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06894797553204276281noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515903861204137058.post-50186171448333243832011-01-28T11:46:35.847-06:002011-01-28T11:46:35.847-06:00It really interferes with my reading to find an er...It really interferes with my reading to find an error. My rhythm is completely thrown off. :O)Dianehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07604687906788800639noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515903861204137058.post-7460340046343886002011-01-28T11:20:31.048-06:002011-01-28T11:20:31.048-06:00Most of my manuscript mistakes are repetition but ...Most of my manuscript mistakes are repetition but they can be all over the place, so you're right, it's great to have a fresh eye to look over a manuscript when it's done.Cindy R. Wilsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13488732331021750408noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515903861204137058.post-56146718800678444112011-01-28T10:54:48.018-06:002011-01-28T10:54:48.018-06:00I do the same thing. I find it helps when I print ...I do the same thing. I find it helps when I print things out to catch some stuff.lotusgirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06663641163048764869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8515903861204137058.post-73583583960729865042011-01-28T10:51:58.769-06:002011-01-28T10:51:58.769-06:00This happens to me a LOT, and for the same reasons...This happens to me a LOT, and for the same reasons you listed. I move things, or sometimes I flat out repeat something on accident. My cp's are really good at picking up on repetition!Jill Kemererhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07865493609868329393noreply@blogger.com